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Its Such A Great Start Is This The End?

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Its Such A Great Start Is This The End?

Poisen in the well and you offer me a drink.
kiss do tell  sweetheart.
Where coming  to a slow decline I think.

I swear on the bible I got from a hotel.
Dreams of rejection  without protection.
Sweetness that  smile has shades of a afterglow 
to another more than secrets do you tell.

Were a couple in a sense were two.
Well your having a affair with the rock solid
trainer  who would have knew.

Well except for the fact that you took him to are favorite bar.
Hey did ya have to bring him home?
No he cant have my last beer what a classy act you are.

It's pretty bad when on are honey moon you  
cheated with some dude on the flight over.
Anyone got a pill for this bad emotional hangover.

I belive honey you got some screws loose in that pretty 
little head.
Yes I understand you wanna help the homeless.
And uh no the beah bum cant share are bed.

Im just saying maybe a doctor would be what
i would recommend.
I knew she nympho from the start.
It  was such a great start i hope this isnt
the end.

Well she a little bad sleeping with my next door neighbor 
the gardner the pool boy and my best friend.
Most the population of earth noneed to pretend.

Okay and the ups guy the pizza boy even the janitor at school.
My little brother and grandad  okay with that im not cool.

My god if i wasnt already crazy into madness I would decend.
It's such a great start.
please tell me were  at the end.
  

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  1. Date: 7/13/2010 3:09:00 PM
    Hey Bro, just to say thnx for the comments on my poem for P.D. Always appreciated! Later, JA

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 11:52:00 AM
    It was a pleasure to read your poetry this afternoon John. Wishing you another day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/10/2010 7:11:00 AM
    Unfaithfulness is bad news...It seems that the person of whom you write does have a problem as you said in sixth stanza first line...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara