It's Mother's Day

~*~ And I am coming to see you, Mom It will take me half the day, by bus But, I got up early, washed my hair with lemons Like you used to do for me I am wearing a real pretty dress And holding a bouquet of pink flowers Remember, when I brought you wilted dandelions Yet, you loved them still Can we just talk about things About our journey, heartbreaks and many joys I think of you every single day, Mom You are my mother and my friend I have a long bus ride home before dark And it is starting to rain and get cold It is never easy to turn and walk away But, all I can do is leave a tear Now, rest in peace, dear Mom I'll be back next year a la memoire de Jacqueline La France ______________________ May 12, 2013 Poetry/Verse/It's Mother's Day Copyright Protected, ID 05-477-423-12 All Rights Reserved, 2013, Constance La France Written for the contest, Mother, Precious Poems sponsor, A Poet Destroyer, Judged 05/66/2013 Fourth Place
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Date: 5/19/2013 11:48:00 AM
such a beautiful tender write for your dear mom - sending a hug
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Date: 5/17/2013 11:00:00 AM
A heartfelt pen. Congrats on deserved win. AO
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Date: 5/17/2013 8:38:00 AM
I felt the deep emotions in this beautiful poem.....my own mother died very young, and I do feel this same emotion every mother's day....so deep within my heart.
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Date: 5/17/2013 6:49:00 AM
Sorry for your loss, it sounds like you had a special relationship.
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Date: 5/16/2013 10:05:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS, CONSTANCE! Thank you for the nice and wonderful heartfelt poem about mom's. ~LOVE~ Linda
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Date: 5/15/2013 1:33:00 PM
A nice poem of love and respect to mother which is beautifully adorned with rhythm. Thanks for sharing. Loved always,bl
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Date: 5/14/2013 5:19:00 PM
Very sweet
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Date: 5/14/2013 4:02:00 AM
Beautiful Poem *hugs*
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Date: 5/13/2013 6:43:00 PM
A lovely poem Constance, a mother should always be remembered. sad emotions, but a lovely visit from the heart~LINDA
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Date: 5/12/2013 6:51:00 PM
I figured where this poem was going, I knew your Mom had passed away and this just left an impression that you were talking about now and not years ago. You have written a spectacular poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wonderfully delightful piece this evening! Great Work!!
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Date: 5/12/2013 3:46:00 PM
very poignant and beautiful! you surprised me with the ending - very clever!
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