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It Matters Not Premiere Contest Winner

It hovers here, a moon opaque, obscuring mountain trails I take. No other living things appear. A moon opaque. . . It hovers here. I follow on along a ledge; below a swirling river’s edge. In front of me, the canyon’s yawn. Along a ledge, I follow on. I see no hue when fog congeals. Oh, doom of one who no more feels! The moon has fled, as so have you. When fog congeals, I see no hue. Now all is dim; it matters not. My dear one’s heart I have not got. No use in living without him. It matters not. Now all is dim. At peace I’ll be if I should fall to murky water from this wall. Oh, yawning canyon, swallow me. If I should fall, at peace I’ll be. Submitted June 18, 2022 for Mark Toney's 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 3 Poetry Contest

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Date: 4/29/2024 7:44:00 PM
Andrea, just checking out some of your poems. It sure sounds good the way it flows. I just noticed that the first and fourth lines are the reverse of each other. Is this something you invented for the poem, or is it a known form, I wonder?
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Date: 6/22/2022 1:25:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, making me delight virtually and poetically over your muse. God bless you.
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Date: 6/21/2022 10:07:00 PM
How nice it is to see the "Not" in the title where it belongs... you are so good with swap quatrains... it's been fun reading these old classics of yours again. Big congrats for 3 wins in a row, my friend.
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Date: 6/20/2022 10:33:00 PM
Intensely sad.... to the extent of accepting death as a blessing ! You have described the dangerous location from which a slip would be so fatal. Congratulations Andrea on your great win
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Date: 6/20/2022 10:15:00 PM
Dear Andrea, I was captivated by the sad lyrical beauty of this emotional piece. How gracefully the rhythm and rhymes and imagery flow from your gifted pen. Exquisite writing. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mark’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 6/20/2022 12:19:00 PM
Greetings, Andrea. This is beautiful poetry. The rhyme, the meter, and the repetition are outstanding. Adding to my Fav poems. One more thing: Step away from the ledge! These guys are not worth it! Congratulations on your win on Mile 3 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 4 has already started!
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Date: 6/20/2022 9:45:00 AM
7th place... Congratulations Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2021 6:38:00 AM
Andrea, this poem is wonderful. The language is so original. Example: In front of me, the canyon's yawn.
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Date: 1/13/2021 8:24:00 AM
Andrea, I love your Quatrian poem and congratulations on having it included in the PS: It's Poetry 2020 Anthology _Constance
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Date: 1/13/2021 8:21:00 AM
Dear Andrea, this poem is awesome and very fitting that it should lead the parade of PS poetry in the 2020 PS Anthology. The form is amazing ~ so lyrical. I noticed the title difference and think that it adds a very interesting layer of interpretation. Bravo for this very well deserved honor. It's a FAVE for me.
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Date: 12/31/2020 7:57:00 PM
I found you in the anthology! A much deserved poem...one of the first in the book. I think that you spend time in nature. Lovely imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/1/2021 9:36:00 AM
In the anthology, my poem has the title IT MATTERS. Good grief!! thanks for reading it in there. I actually do not spend a lot of time in nature but I watch it a lot in movies. haha. Luv ya, Kim. Happy New year.
Date: 12/2/2020 2:58:00 AM
Andrea, I was glad to see this wonderful swap quatrain included in the anthology, congrats. John
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Date: 4/29/2020 7:00:00 AM
One of your darker writes. I'm so glad you never fell into that yawning canyon, haha! Belated congrats on the trophy it garnered. This is one of the few from Sistine I have not visited yet. You used the swap quatrain to powerful effect. Brilliant writing, Andrea, another FAV for me.
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Date: 2/25/2020 6:28:00 PM
Hello Andrea Dietrick, so very romantic. I felt the love flow in this poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs Darlene
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Date: 12/9/2019 8:46:00 AM
The amazing form I haven't seen before. The pen is off the charts also: another masterpiece of style. Twilight shades and hues are pleasing to the eye. Pls, accept my belated congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2019 11:56:00 AM
'Andrea, Congratulations on you win! Extremely well done. The feeling is captivating. David'
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Date: 12/2/2019 3:32:00 PM
12/2/19 Congratulations on your win, Andrea. You mastered a difficult poetic form with such graceful images I could feel walking that ledge with you.
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Date: 11/29/2019 11:32:00 PM
Andrea, I like your poem and prize 'It Matters Not'. With swapped first and fourth line in each Quatrain. So glad you didn't fall. -Richard
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Date: 11/29/2019 8:17:00 PM
Quite deserved, very nice,Peter
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Date: 11/29/2019 5:34:00 PM
Saw this in the winners list and knew I'd read it before, commented on it back in 13,just as stunning now. Congrats once again. Take care, Richard
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Date: 11/29/2019 9:10:00 AM
Congrats my friend on your top finish in this contest. Beautifully done Andrea.
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Date: 11/28/2019 11:55:00 PM
Hello Andrea Congrats on your winning poem
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Date: 11/28/2019 10:08:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea...congratulations on your trophy win....Happy Thanksgiving as well :) hugs
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Date: 11/28/2019 9:40:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea! A fav for me!
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Date: 11/28/2019 5:18:00 AM
Congrats on your top win. Love this. Bless you and hugs to you, Gina
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