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It Is Then

When the sky is dark and the moon bright, the moths heading for heavenly lights it is then I call your name When the children sleep, and the mothers wait for cold and tired fathers late it is then I hear you knock When the laughters quiet and the silence loud, and the stray cats sing, strong and proud It is then I feel your voice when bodies lie and thought wander dreams slipping like hands cupping water It is then you are alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/6/2009 2:38:00 PM
You are really good.
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Date: 1/20/2009 5:57:00 AM
This is amazing, Rina! Gives a soft, smooth, ethereal feeling. Love the line: "dreams slipping like hands cupping water", however, the entire piece is filled with beautiful imagery! Wishing the best to you and yours...Mikki
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