Isolation Keeps

Along roads where mistral sweeps
Loneliness within ambles on
Every other step falling, keeps isolation
While, happiness continues out of sync

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/27/2012 11:28:00 PM
Hmmm.. interesting - a nice free verse poem. The title really sets the concept of loneliness of the poem. Very powerful. I like! :) Always, Laura
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Date: 3/27/2012 11:28:00 PM
Oh, and late congrats on your win! :D
Date: 2/11/2012 12:26:00 PM
mmm.. can certainly relate to this one.. putting this poem on favorites as well as you as a fav. poet... very nice....
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Date: 1/4/2012 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Michael Smith. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2011 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your big first place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:46:00 PM
Very neat poem.. evocative! Congratulations.
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Date: 8/8/2011 2:22:00 PM
Really lovely poem. Congratulations on your win. I would like to read more of your poems. Will enjoy an evening doing that soon. Lee
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of John, Michael
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Date: 8/8/2011 10:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Sayings Of Wisdom" contest Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2011 8:36:00 AM
Michael, Quite a back door approach, but effective out of sync. smile. Congratulations on a worthy first place entry. Thanks for your support of my contest! Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/8/2011 4:17:00 AM
Well done Michael. Congrats on your win. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/8/2011 3:08:00 AM
hey Michael, congrats on your win, David
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations Michael.
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Date: 8/8/2011 12:03:00 AM
enlightened thoughts, michael.. sweet cheers to you for placing real well on the winning chart! :)huggs!
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:53:00 PM
Congrats on you win Mike!!!!!
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Date: 8/7/2011 10:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Mike. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:59:00 PM
Michael, congrats on your first place win in this contest of words of wisdom..~Glenna
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Date: 8/7/2011 9:33:00 PM
Congrats Michael on your first place win with these words of wisdom luv.. great piece..
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Date: 4/21/2011 6:22:00 PM
Hi! Michael.. how are you.. nice free verse poem.. isolation is a sad way to live... and the hard thing is when one does not know the fall one can take... sure enjoyed... and yes the world will continue to go on... take care.. p.d.
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