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In a drift along the shore
Stuck and lost in paradise;
Only me and my Love and a guitar
Letting the rhythm hypnotize;
As we sing an Ocean song 
Trying to create a rhythm;
Eventually  the notes are complete,
Destiny an isolated song.

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  1. Date: 10/11/2013 9:54:00 AM
    Fantastic vibe! I concur, killer last line. =)

  1. Date: 10/10/2013 12:57:00 PM
    "destiny an isolated song", love that line. Keep up the good work...TAH