Isle Kissed By Waters

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It splits the river into Parenthesis enclosed year round Rocky terrain clothed in trees River isle you please Spring time dresses you in white In summer clothed in pine green Fall's gowns are rust, yellow, gold Isle viewed from mountain Wildlife plays upon your ground Birds built nest upon branches Safely living within borders River water kissed Senior Moment Silly me I had already written One like this ...Ha!!!

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 12/15/2012 9:49:00 PM

I like it ,,,,, great imagery Sara ;}

The Situation

Date: 12/15/2012 5:51:00 AM

Wonderful islands in the stream. Seem so delicate yet no man dare to build. Lest they be swallowed by the rIvers rage.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2012 1:07:00 AM

well, I sure love it anyway, senior moment or not.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/14/2012 12:14:00 PM

Dear Sara, "One like this ...Ha!!!" Even if YOU did write this theme before, YOU are reaching many new POETS the second time. I find that once a POEM is read/commented on it does not recieve new comments unless it is Featured or Wins a contest. It is a Superb way to revive some of YOUR past Masterpieces LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 12/14/2012 8:26:00 AM

Dear Sara how are you?? hopefully you were having a bless week, your poem is really inspiring Sara, your words always succeed to bring the splendor of nature become more alive :D - Hug, Yanny

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/13/2012 9:47:00 AM

Even if you have written one like this before, this one is probably the superior one of the two! This is an amazing and creative write my friend! I truly loved reading this incredibly outstanding and remarkable poem this morning! What a natural wonder you have written here Sara! Great Work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/13/2012 9:47:00 AM

still like it Sara, bring them on,, love what you write...