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Is She the One?

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Is She the One?

(Inspired by the brilliant new avant garde
 Italian film: "I Am Love")

Could she shatter vows, and is she the one
who’d relinquish everything just for love?
If it meant that all she knew would come undone,
could she shatter vows, and is she the one?
If she knew that those she cared about might shun
her, could she go against her God above?
Could she shatter vows, and is she the one
who’d relinquish everything just for love?


For the Contest: Is She the One?
         sponsored by Tavarus M. Moreland














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  1. Date: 9/9/2010 10:45:00 AM
    Congratulations Andrea on your win in Tavarus Moreland's contest "Is She The One". Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 11:04:00 PM
    just dropping by super super quick here to say congrats...eeek I am stressing right now--my mind's just not working-- anyhow-- email you soon & comment on you more soon ok?? congrats on being in Tavarus' list-- lol me I am hanging by a thread--glad I at least made it ;) --hugs to you, soon-to-be birthday girl ;) happy labor day weekend btw nikko :)

  1. Date: 9/3/2010 1:53:00 PM
    Congrats Andrea on your HM in Tavarus's contest... an awesome write.. a wonderful win and enjoy your honor so special..with luv my friend..

  1. Date: 8/14/2010 4:07:00 PM
    Oh my... I love this one... Just sort of picked it out from your list and browsing. This is very meaningful to me (probably different than what you meant though). Wonderful read. hugs, Kris

  1. Date: 7/23/2010 2:50:00 AM
    A lovely write.

  1. Date: 7/22/2010 1:05:00 PM
    Nice move in rhythmn in line 5 to 6, my dear. That shows an appreciation for craft and I think that you are in the running. Please Soup Mail me and I'll answer your other queries, if you wish. Privacy is paramnount, sometimes. Regards as alway, Gerard

  1. Date: 7/7/2010 9:25:00 PM
    Very moving poem. I haven't heard of the movie. Wonderful poem.

  1. Date: 7/6/2010 5:28:00 PM
    Many have...in the game of love. It has such incredible power. This is an AWESOME Triolet, Andrea. A winner for sure. And...in answer to your question...Yes! 'Traced Upon my Fingertips', is a true event in my life. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 7/5/2010 11:00:00 PM
    vows are just words on paper, ive noticed this when i look around me. great thoughts too, i like it! ~Always&Forever Lynette

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 8:05:00 PM
    interesting idea!

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 4:49:00 PM
    hehe I'm back to reply on your interpretation of my poem :) Okay so in the first stanza the girl as the baby and the couple looking at her are her parents, and then from then on all the 'she's throughout the rest of the poem mean her. So it was basically an attempt to depict the whole life of that one girl through the eyes of others, especially her husband that is first introduced as the boy with the black-and-white photo. But of course, I might just decide it's all about souls. :) -Grace

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 4:05:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 12:52:00 PM
    just stopping by to read, and enjoyed your poem all over again Adrea, also have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july. Looks nice outside today,.so be nice to all and give all them kids extra works to pop,....p..d

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 12:16:00 PM
    This is very good Andrea. I hope it does well in the contest. Don't think I'll be going after this one myself. I'm not much of a love poem writer..................Charles

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 11:17:00 AM
    Loved this piece here.. I'm new so have mercy and I hope you have an open mind my styles pretty different. Enjoy ya day

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 10:48:00 AM
    Andrea. Saginaw is the last outpost of - I won't call it civilization - nothington. I fit in perfectly here....remain anonymous. Again, YOU HAVE A WONDERFUL FOURTH! Love, Dave

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 10:24:00 AM
    What? You consider Saginaw a small town? Actually it is now classified as a village. After the automobile industry sunk low, Saginaw went from 100,000 to under 60,000. For me, this is just about the right size. You have a good Fourth, ya hear. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 10:21:00 AM
    looks like a winner to me my friend hope to see it in top 5 hate these sad ones but eyes glued to them like a thriller keep that pen flowing happy 4 hun hugs and thanks for blog comment

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 10:14:00 AM
    This is heartrending… a precise, simple entry for Tavarus’ contest. Have you read my poem, “She is everything I need to know” and recently I wrote “marred marriages” the later was dedicated to all those who stayed strong after being brokenhearted but the former was dedicated to you all. Love your creative style mom Andrea! I love you mom, Adeleke

  1. Date: 7/4/2010 8:43:00 AM
    This form is new to me, but the poem is great, Andrea! There are lots of people who just cast aside their vows to follow through on infatuation's lure. Happy Fourth! Love, Carolyn

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