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My dress is like the sun, the sun is like you are. Red is like the blood. Rain is like ice cubes. The grass is as green as a bean. The snow is like ice cream. A hand is like a rubberband. The color tan is like wood. A pillow is like a feather. Orange is like an orange dog. The world is like a big blue marble. This sky is as blue as the ocean. A rat is fat. I am red. The beat of the heart is like a clock.

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Date: 2/1/2013 12:08:00 AM
Hi Susan, beautiful poem you have going here. You’ve captured the comparisons very well. What you've said about the rat - lol. Very well penned. I’m certainly looking forward to read more of your work. Vicky.
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Date: 1/31/2013 8:05:00 PM
Nice poem
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