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Iridescent Crow

iridescent crow sits near top in pecan tree.. nuts cracked under tires intelligent bird has cars and trucks do his work.. training future flock

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Kathryn Collins

Date: 10/19/2012 8:53:00 AM

Wait a minute, Sara - these are two more of the best Haiku I've ever read. These are a pleasure to read on a rainy morning with no cawing. love, Kathy

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/19/2012 7:15:00 AM

you are so right Sara, the old crow, got to be the bees knees of intelligence.. like this poem.....

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 10/19/2012 2:49:00 AM

Lovely Haiku! Really wish to perfect each of my Haikus

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/18/2012 9:33:00 PM

Lovely poem!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 10/18/2012 6:52:00 PM

Lovely and clever haiku Sara, Beauty in all of God's creatures... Cynthia

Kash Poet

Date: 10/18/2012 6:48:00 PM

Haha...very witty haiku here Sara.Enjoyed the read.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/18/2012 4:34:00 PM

nice one! very clever birds and very well-written poem!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/18/2012 3:39:00 PM

You are right...crows are very intelligent birds! That's why we try to scare them off with scarecrows but how it rarely works! We had scarecrows up to fend them off from out of our sweet corn but they still managed to get in, ugh it's so frustrating at times! This write is a wonderful and delightful write! I really enjoyed your clever and masterfully written Haiku! Great Work!!