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Invitation To the Rain

revive us with your mist, refresh the earth calming rain, go not astray settle our dust and care rain, rain, come softly symphony of our delight summons is awash pitti–pat, pitti-pat, pat feel the rhythm in the rain shower of coolness calls our souls to reflection why the umbrella combining kimo, tanka, and senryu in an invitation to the rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/16/2014 9:34:00 PM
rain to the T wonderful poem
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:14:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:50:00 PM
how cool and that ending line why the umbrella. That is a great touch. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 6/28/2013 4:31:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Nice combination...Nice flow..Congrats on your superb write and win...
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Date: 6/28/2013 1:52:00 PM
Congratulations Reason on your fantastic win. A fine poem with the three different forms. Right now I'm singing "Rain, Rain Go Away, Don't Come Back For A Week Or Two." It's been raining everyday for a week and will continue into next wheel too. We've been washed clean. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:43:00 AM
I love the rain. It is great how you found the music in the falling rain. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/28/2013 6:13:00 AM
great write. congrats or the win
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:06:00 PM
Nice sound effect! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:45:00 PM
Lovely...all three are winners. congrats. BG
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:46:00 PM
Very nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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