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Invalid Response

Tell me clearly
How you feel
Let me know
If it's really real
Tell me outright
What's the deal
But as you do
Don't tell me NO.

This confusion
Confusing me
Making me wonder
What's meant to be
Trying to figure out
When 'I' will be 'we'
But all the time hoping
It will never be NEVER.

So, what is it
Where do we go
I'm seeking an answer
I need to know
What do we have here
Will it grow
Please respond
But please don't say NO.

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  1. Date: 8/9/2013 6:11:00 AM
    Restrictive covenant? We are reading, please upload some more.

  1. Date: 2/15/2013 4:12:00 AM
    Well thought and crafted!

  1. Date: 8/7/2012 4:49:00 PM

  1. Date: 4/28/2011 2:51:00 AM
    Nicely created poem, with a feeling of unease that is conveyed convincingly.

  1. Date: 4/27/2011 4:39:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Lina. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 4/26/2011 11:21:00 AM
    Very nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy