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Introspection

Introspection

For one split second
I know myself    see clearly
Then    the sudden void
As one who falls    perishes
Descending from some high place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/8/2012 7:37:00 AM

Great thoughts penned..I need to find that high place for a few minutes..Enjoyed reading this morn...Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/7/2012 2:07:00 PM

You've taken me to an interesting place here Daver; thanks for the post!!

Daver Austin
Date: 6/8/2012 7:48:00 AM

Son and wife are visiting, so I won't be on the soup for a while. Thanks for reading my stuff, Joe. Catch ya later. daver

Dave Timperley

Date: 6/2/2012 6:19:00 AM

Got me to thinking it was like your life flashing before your eyes experience, then it stopped and left me thinking some more. Great write D. God Bless. Dave.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2012 7:11:00 PM

Daver, you have come up with a profound message about yourself with this short form. VERY well done, my friend and I cannot imagine you will ever go dry with words for us here. Just write about your ten cats. I bet you could do a cat poem a day with all their antics!! And in between, give us more introspection poems! luv, Andrea

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/1/2012 12:13:00 PM

Oie yoie, much like 'falling to pieces', but when that happens you can pick em all up!:) Some days are like that, Daver.:( For two days I'd had an adventure, misadventure...all started by taking the dog for a walk. (blame it all on her, oh not really)! Someone had offered me two ducks...I thought they were geese, but was told today they are swans. It's a long story, Daver..lol:) Wishing you the best!! Love, Mikki

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2012 6:36:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your amazing writing this morning Daver. I hope you will continue to write and share your words with us. Have a wonderful weekend filled with joy and love. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

Date: 6/1/2012 3:59:00 AM

It is an exceptional poem,davera.Well done!

James Peranteau

Date: 5/31/2012 6:10:00 PM

A very profound write Dave ! Sounds like a Cat Scan is needed dear poet ! Stay off of the steps dear friend...or of her...*smiles* Hows them there batteries holding up sir ? Power house 'Introspection' Dave ! Have a wonderful night....much love, james

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/31/2012 6:01:00 PM

Hello, Daver! wow,, I want to feel this one split second view.. i bet you have had other thoughts ,,, i want to examine... lol... love it..love it.... nothing is complicated, when your subconsciousness is speaking, thank you for sharing* Take care~ Always..your truly dearest SWEET Kitty Kat ;-) PD. Meow!