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Intrigued

Surveying the empty room's avenues Opened possibilities await guest Built in bookshelf seems to openly intrigue Here will place books and toys of children blessed Adequate space within the quiet walls But there's an eerieness that now lingers It could be no lights or candles that palls But those could cast shadows and scary fingers Maybe the cloudy sky with sun suppressed Effects the eerie pallor of the room Need to come once more with candle requested And see if cobbwebs swept away with broom A house that could become a home ready Which has the scent of broomstick gourd heady

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/7/2013 5:37:00 PM
lovely poem .....
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Date: 4/7/2013 3:20:00 PM
"It could be no lights or candles that palls But those could cast shadows and scary fingers. I particularly liked those two lines. The poem as whole is superb.
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:11:00 AM
It's looking good. I'll wait for you to finishe it. Lucilla
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Date: 4/6/2013 1:43:00 AM
Excellent write. enjoyed your poem. tfs
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:05:00 PM
Enjoable words here Sara, pleased I managed to stop by, Joe..)
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Date: 4/5/2013 5:08:00 PM
This is a brilliant and 'intriguing' write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! You have mastered the sonnet with this piece, what a grand poem, Great Work!!
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Date: 4/5/2013 7:40:00 AM
Striking curiosity & anticipation...necessary triggers to the imagination. Keep it up! :)
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