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Interlude With Ana Luisa

Interlude with Ana Luisa I hold you closely in my arms I feel your soft breathing within While little curls touch my skin— Soft brownish gold under my chin I hold you near my little charm Together we look to the sky Counting the stars; one, two, three, four; You sit quietly admiring more And, I know what I am here for Bonding, my granddaughter and I You dance your way into my heart— Singing angelic tunes, you ruled Turning simple into jewels Winding joy onto my heart-spool; I hold you closely – soon we’ll part @2011 – Evelyn Pearl Carpenter Anderson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/8/2016 4:15:00 PM
Touching! I feel the love.
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Date: 3/26/2016 8:06:00 PM
Thank you for everyone for the lovely, encouraging comments. Happy Easter!
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Date: 3/26/2016 8:00:00 PM
Lovely poem to be treasured by granddaughter
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Date: 3/19/2016 9:49:00 AM
with so much sadness in the world your words keeps hope alive in such a wonderful poem it's truly beautiful to read, bless you
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Date: 3/17/2016 11:18:00 AM
A great happiness of grandmother lovely expressed my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 3/17/2016 8:35:00 AM
Every grandmother who reads this will instantly relate. Love that line, "Winding joy onto my heart-spool."
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Date: 3/17/2016 12:44:00 AM
The last line is intense... Identification makes the eyes moist...a very good poem....
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Date: 3/17/2016 12:35:00 AM
Very whimsical and magical write. Perfect intro to spring.
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Date: 3/15/2014 9:50:00 AM
Brilliant write.Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, pearl
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Date: 3/11/2014 10:29:00 AM
E. Pearl, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:29:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day E. Pearl. Love, Carol
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