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Interloper

Look to the outside, look within, The penciling trees, the straw of the sun, Skin white as milk, cheeks turn to cherries, The gaze falls deeper within. No more shall this stranger taunt me, Its eyes glistening with the deep bordeaux of blood, In which moment the heart begins to bleed, Consciousness lost in the reflection of another. Its palms gently caress its cheeks, Mirroring my every move, my every breath, A sheeny droplet passes down its complexion, Yet I feel the sadness bound in my heart. And still it stares, trapped before me, Hands gripping the nearby porcelain vase, Eyes lustrous, almost mad, It sends the delicate prop against the cold surface. Crimson, scarlet streams descend gently, It still stares - bewildered and dazed, Both our hands seen only through thick brooks of ruby, And a smile appears. Hello stranger, The soul within remains unchanged, Our gaze saunters and with a final glance of approval, I turn and gait forth, sensing no more the bothering embodiment.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/4/2016 12:13:00 PM
great write
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Date: 12/12/2011 10:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place finish. I found it to be the type of poem that should be spoken word. Definitely said aloud! Very nice!
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:42:00 AM
Congrats and this is a lovely poem :)
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Date: 12/7/2011 4:51:00 PM
Very cool poem. Great imagery. And congrats on your top win.
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Date: 12/7/2011 11:47:00 AM
congrats on your win with this gem. cory
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Date: 12/7/2011 8:53:00 AM
Amazing and introspective....a wonderful winning poem. Congratulations, Martina!
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Date: 12/7/2011 5:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's "Mirror" contest Martina. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/7/2011 1:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your winx
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Date: 12/6/2011 9:48:00 PM
Martina, I enjoyed your work. Congratulations on your first place with this poem. May there be many more. RAY
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Date: 12/6/2011 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on an awesome win!! Great work of art!
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:47:00 PM
Outstanding write, Martina. Glowingly great. A deserving first place win! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on first place in my mirror contest! It was very gripping. Soon as I read it I knew it was the best.
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Date: 12/6/2011 1:35:00 PM
Goodness! Thank you so much!
Date: 12/2/2011 3:13:00 PM
That was really good, and it says alot.
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