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Inside the Spooky Fence

Magic is rampant inside the spooky fence A witch stirs her potion which comes to a boil Evil creatures that exist here are intense Her mighty powers take its form from the soil The Jack-O-Lanterns hold a devilish eye Making for certain no-one ever gets by There are trees that are gnarled and seemingly dead Everything lives in a haunted house ahead Russell Sivey

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 2:38:00 PM

Cool title on this one. I enjoyed this last one of yours I am reading for the day. I think I got caught up with many of your newer posts today. Countdown to halloween, Russel, only maybe 27 days to gooooooo

Don Johnson

Date: 10/3/2012 6:32:00 PM

you rhyming again, Russell ole friend, stay clear of the bloody green fence, witches n warlocks and the mad n insane, are waiting 4 recompense:) re:'Inside the Spooky Fence' Russell Sivey..... Don

Don Johnson
Date: 10/3/2012 6:38:00 PM

the guys from the war, have been there before, they sidestep away they aint dense, they dont want no locking of the bloody great gate, no putting behind the green fence... ww2 soldiers a bit crazed were frightened by the green fence and the lectric shocks etc

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2012 4:44:00 PM

all the potent contents of a haunting depiction of the house and magic cajoling inside by yet another eerie witch .. excellent imagery Russell luv ..

Daver Austin

Date: 10/3/2012 2:46:00 PM

Great haunted house, Russ. "Her mighty powers take its form from the soil." Delicious! Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2012 1:19:00 PM

Straight from that spooky movie scene..I wonder where they find those deserted big old homes to make the movies..I have a picture in my mind's eye of what this one is like..Don't want to go there..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/3/2012 9:16:00 AM

only you can relay an array of halloween themes with a slew of stunning approaches, russell... you also scare me in a delightful way---trees snarled, devilish eye; perfect!..:) huggs!

Denver Reese

Date: 10/2/2012 10:01:00 PM

I'm diggin' the Halloween theme, it's my favorite holiday. I get in the Halloween mood in my writing too. I would say that the last line is probably my favorite. It's like the reader has to make a decision as to whether or not they would go to the house or not.