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Inside The Mind That Controls The Pen

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Inside The Mind That Controls The Pen

Sometimes when i say goodbye.
I wonder how I hold it togather befor
the phone touches the reciever.

Does she know the pain I mask.
Memories make us drunk with emotion.
Time makes us bitter from the cold.

And in the darkness she brings light.
Under the ice she creates warmth.
She kisses  the past away.

My shelter in which to run 
If I choose to lead so does she follow.
Two halfs of one heart.

Weve walked across broken glass to lay
in a feather bed.
The nights passionet flow 
her head apon my chest.

And how could I find one so perfect for me.
Distance takes the heart and traces the tear.
Such comfort brought from the understanding.
That pain would be erased if she were here.

Jules i see that next day as a promise 
set in stone.
That from that first hello 
we found in one another a reason to never be alone.
The highway rolls into the horizen
eternal is the love.

As a sun sets apon the ocean we stand 
my arms wrapped around you waves crash into the shore.
In love I give everything.
For i could spend a lifetime here with you.
And still thirst for more.

With words we struggle to say.
What flows from the pen.
Also bleeds form the soul and that
shall never go away.

Dedicated  To Jules   honey  sometimes  not even the page can say 
all that heart holds  
Love  always John Patrick Robbins

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  1. Date: 2/11/2010 4:37:00 PM
    Expressive and emotional write John from your gifted pen.. I believe this is a form of narrative ... intricate and passionate lines for the reader to entertain.. luv is never easy ...but ... always worth it... luv... Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S... thankxxx for your special comments on my poetry tonight....

  1. Date: 2/5/2010 11:17:00 PM
    That is a very beautiful write with all the feelings of your heart poured out into it. A wonderful dedication to your love. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 2/4/2010 1:03:00 AM
    No two souls are us lucky than those who have found their soulmate in life--and you dear friend, are one of those lucky few, together with your beloved Julie :) Smiles yet again as I read this piece that just overflows with love for your other half :) I pray for your continued love and strength in your married life :) Thanks as always for your kind words, reading your comments always serve as an inspiring reminder of why I write :) Write on, my friend :)

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 6:35:00 PM
    Nicely written.I hope all is well with you.

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 6:19:00 PM
    Baby, This is a wonderful write. ALl your work is wonderful and i love you with all my heart. Im glad i can be such and insperatoin to you. You are my true soulmate. Forever we will be. Your loving wife. Julie Robbins.

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 6:09:00 PM
    very beautiful and heart felt. i know these feelings. well writen. John H Loving III

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 10:51:00 AM
    John, This is a very beautiful poem of love. Thanks for your comments about my poetry. (soup mail) Lovingly, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 2/3/2010 8:37:00 AM
    Jules is quite an inspiration to you, John, and finding this type of love is rare and wonderful. I love the way you worded your dedication and hope you have shown this poem to Jules. Excellent work, John! Love, Carolyn