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Insane Asylum

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Insane Asylum

A silent trip to the past
The memory of a lost battle
A sign of weakness
Fake smiles surround us
Green slyly decorates the walls
Enclosed hospital
No way to escape a fornicated cage
A lunatic they claim
Needle into the skin
Samples of blood
Is she on drugs?
No caffeine
Afraid we'll go crazy
Talks of religion
Talks of theories
Talks of salvation
They don't know in what waters we lurk in
A cry for help
The uneasy stares
Checked upon every minute
'Watch out, they'll commit suicide'
Us, crazy?
No, only realists
Death is around the corner, why not choose when?
False stories
False emotions
We need to get out of this hell hole
Going away from that prison
A smirk on my face tells them they've been fooled
So long suckers
Here's to your false treatments

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  1. Date: 8/19/2011 1:04:00 AM
    your poetry is surrounded by hidden truth. lovely and strange. i cant help but want more.