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~innocence Bloomed~

Carefree little hands Found perfect pleasure in the sand Yellow bucket stands Written for Abe's Contest Inspired by my daughter

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/26/2009 3:27:00 PM

My dear poetess, you are one in a million, and may your daughter continue to inspire you forever. Great write.

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/30/2009 10:24:00 PM

Tyesha please don't take any of this the wrong way ok - don't mean to sound all forwards or nothing my wife and I are certainly forever just want you to know you have friends who care and will do all we can to help - Just stay in touch and let us know if we can do anything at all to help, YF4L,MJ

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/30/2009 10:16:00 PM

Tyesha - I have missed you and I must say this is a wonderful Haiku - Very well penned - Hey our email is antoinette2332@sbcglobal.net - Our address is - Mike & Toni 310 S Sacramento st. Willows Ca, 95988 and our Phone is 530 -934 -2190 - so now regardless of what happens you can keep in touch - my cell is 530 -354- 5247 - if you need some help I don't know what I can do but Toni & I will do all we can to help you - Thats what true friends are for - YF4L, God Bless, MJ

Abe Lopez

Date: 5/18/2009 7:25:00 PM

I enjoy reading the haiku form of poetry. you have done a geat job capturing a childhood experience at the beach great job with this write! Thank you for supporting my contest....alopez

Date: 5/1/2009 12:26:00 PM

I can feel the innocence in this one. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/30/2009 3:44:00 AM

soup mail for Ms Ty

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/24/2009 3:08:00 PM

wonderful,nostalgia of my child hood,when i fiiled buckets with sand and made castles,i love the sand

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/24/2009 5:22:00 AM

Aww, this is too precious and so beautifully written. Good luck with this winning poem. Love, Shar

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/24/2009 12:39:00 AM

Nice work with the monorhyme. You are very talented, best of luck in the contest...Raul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/23/2009 11:06:00 PM

Tyesha, Children are so beautiful. Mine are grown, but I still look at those young years' pictures. Another sweet poem. Always, Dane

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/23/2009 7:38:00 PM

This is beautiful, Tyesha. Who could help but love a carefree child playing in the sand? Excellent!

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/23/2009 6:23:00 PM

Good luck in the contest! This is a lovely write, so full of happiness. Children are such a pleasure. There innocence and beauty are always inspiring. Smiles from Lolita

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/23/2009 6:06:00 PM

You don't need a lot of words to write something beautiful. Nice job lovey.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/23/2009 4:36:00 PM

Such sweet, fun images!! Good luck in Abe's contest!! Such a cute poem! Love, Carrie