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Inks Destruction of a Promise

As I sit at the stroke of 3 In this lucubrator And watch the flame of the candle flicker, I sort through scraps of your heart On old crumpled paper, And listen to the hebetude Of your written words Promising me Everything. I feel a tear drop From the corner of my eye And land on the paper Smearing the useless promises of the ink. I take a hand full of the promises And hold it just above the flame, Boutefeu upon it. I see the ink bubble And watch as the paper turn darker Till finally Its nothing but ash. As I burn the pile full of Promises and dreams, Written down for all to see…, I also burn you And everything you were to me. For you were all a lie! Lucubrator- a person who studies by night, or by candlelight. Hebetude- dullness; bluntness; obtuseness; want of discernment. Boutefeu- is a French word, and literally means “to set fire.”

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Date: 5/11/2013 8:56:00 PM
this is beautiful! i absolutely love it! amazing poem! btw this is jim! :P
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Date: 1/30/2013 1:49:00 PM
I love this poem written here! Love the way you added the definitions at the bottom for some of the readers to understand the meaning without them having to get a dictionary. I should do that on my work as well. Please keep writing!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Date: 1/29/2013 1:55:00 PM
this can pass as poetry.
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Sean Cannon
Date: 1/29/2013 2:27:00 PM
Excuse me, but who are you to say what poetry is? Poetry is all things, yet nothing at all. It depends on how you look at it. This is beautiful poetry, you just may not agree with the poem.

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