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Inhale

Heaving waves lift me
Over ageless moonlit sea –
I inhale the dark

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/12/2013 5:15:00 PM

This is so picturesque for me, Rhonda-- I love that last line... Also thank you so much for your thoughts and prayers-- pls read my replies in Carrie's blog for the links, Chris mentioned "Doctors Without Borders" being a worthy organization-- or you can also go to my latest post to see what he wrote there about the org. Thank you!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/4/2012 6:18:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 11:05:00 AM

Rhonda, congrats in Brian's contest xox~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#200" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 8/29/2012 4:17:00 PM

A wonderful haiku, deserving of your win.

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/16/2012 5:57:00 PM

Beautiful and creative! Good write Rhonda :-)

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 8/8/2012 10:15:00 AM

well that's better than inhaling the water, lol! but seriously, nice imagery. I like it. hey, how about another one: exhale...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2012 8:18:00 PM

WOW!!!!!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/6/2012 5:48:00 AM

Oh Wow, this is powerful stuff, just love this. harry

Robert Pettit

Date: 8/5/2012 11:38:00 PM

I can inhale the dark also as long as there's no cigar or cigarette smoke in the dark. Good haiku.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/5/2012 3:44:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

David Williams

Date: 8/5/2012 3:09:00 PM

Rhonda inhaling the beauty of this now,,,David

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/5/2012 3:04:00 PM

Wow, this poem moves me, and in the good direction Rhonda! I truly love this incredible poem, I'm moved by the descriptions you have laid on me here! Wonderful piece my friend! I just love it! Great Work!!