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Incapable twenty four

Twenty four years looking for perfection
But all I’ve gotten is rejection.
Refusing to believe
I know they always deceive.

Twenty four years and my heart has been broken up
Like bubbles, sometimes, they just pump up.
My world has been crushed down
But my head has faced the town.

Twenty four years and I’m still waiting,
but now, I feel like hating.
I want to be hold
Cause I see my hopes to get old.

Twenty four years and no one has really fought
Some of them, misery have brought.
Incapable is how I feel 
And It doesn’t feel real.

Twenty four years and I still wonder
Is there any thunder?
Someone who can leave everything to follow my soul
Dry my tears and give me console.

Twenty four years and I don’t know what I lack
That they always take their promises back.
Incapable of being loved
It’s not something I feel proud of.

Copyright © Ruth Miranda

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  1. Date: 10/10/2010 11:23:00 AM
    i think your words are out of this world thank you for sharing again my friend [duncan]

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 9:07:00 PM
    I like these your words. Well placed! Keep it coming. Joy (Jew)

  1. Date: 10/4/2010 10:15:00 AM
    From what I am reading this morning it looks as if everyone found some inspiration to write this weekend. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Ruth. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 5:06:00 PM
    so powerful excellent write my friend [duncan]

  1. Date: 10/3/2010 6:03:00 AM
    Well expressed thoughts of being incapable twenty four years, Ruth