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In Wonderment, They Stared

What a joy it would be to see you walk the Glens
On purple bloomed heather, on the lands of the Highlander men
To witness your aura, your smile, amidst the Ben's atop with snow
For no matter who stands beside you, being there they'll surely glow

Being there they'll surely glow, proud to be standing there
To your beauty they will look in awe, in wonderment, amazing stare
Whilst all around there grows, many ferns from a forgotten past
For no matter who stands beside you, your beauty will always last

Your beauty will always last for it's captured in many hearts
In wonderment amazing stare, from the Highlands you'll never depart
Now imbedded your heart runs free, to roam these Alba Glens
And this Scotsman chosen beside you, your choice of Highland men  









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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 1/25/2012 9:59:00 AM
An irresistable look at the Highlands and that special someone who lives in your heart. Lovely verse James; you have such a flair for putting a shine in your words! :)
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Date: 1/25/2012 7:48:00 AM
I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it James. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:45:00 AM
an outstanding write James. I would be proud of it.
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:35:00 AM
A poem rich in words and imagery, how lovely !!
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Date: 1/24/2012 11:29:00 AM
Oh Heathcliff, come back to me.
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