Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership

In Wonderment, They Stared

James Fraser Avatar James Fraser - LIFETIME Premium Member James Fraser - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled In Wonderment, They Stared which was written by poet James Fraser. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by James Fraser

Best James Fraser Poems

+ Fav Poet

Poet's Notes

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem.

In Wonderment, They Stared

What a joy it would be to see you walk the Glens
On purple bloomed heather, on the lands of the Highlander men
To witness your aura, your smile, amidst the Ben's atop with snow
For no matter who stands beside you, being there they'll surely glow

Being there they'll surely glow, proud to be standing there
To your beauty they will look in awe, in wonderment, amazing stare
Whilst all around there grows, many ferns from a forgotten past
For no matter who stands beside you, your beauty will always last

Your beauty will always last for it's captured in many hearts
In wonderment amazing stare, from the Highlands you'll never depart
Now imbedded your heart runs free, to roam these Alba Glens
And this Scotsman chosen beside you, your choice of Highland men  

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 1/25/2012 9:59:00 AM
    An irresistable look at the Highlands and that special someone who lives in your heart. Lovely verse James; you have such a flair for putting a shine in your words! :)

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 7:48:00 AM
    I wish I had a better understanding on the forms of poetry so I could give you a clear confident comment on your writing. I will tell you I do love reading poetry. I thank you for sharing yours today I enjoyed reading it James. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 12:30:00 PM
    An awesome poem from a man who knows how, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:45:00 AM
    an outstanding write James. I would be proud of it.

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:35:00 AM
    A poem rich in words and imagery, how lovely !!

  1. Date: 1/24/2012 11:29:00 AM
    Oh Heathcliff, come back to me.