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In Wonderland

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Below is the poem entitled In Wonderland which was written by poet Rj Hellmann. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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In Wonderland

Tick Tock
Reachin' for the Clock
Hip Hop 
My mind don't stop

Hand Fan
Coming to a stand
Neat Feat
Wont get from my seat

Strong Long
My body's so wrong
Teenie Tiny 
He looks almighty

Loud Proud
Voices in the clouds
Room Boom
To big to assume

Space Race 
I'm not in this place
Head Bed
Full of lead

Stars Mars
Sitting in the sidecar
Grow Woe
Eyes a no show

Grip Grin
Hands so thin
Fine Line
Sanity's not mine

Girth Mirth
Coming back to earth
Hulky Hazy 
I must be going crazy

This a poem I wrote sometime ago about the strange things that would sometimes happen to my senses of time and size. It is only recently that I found out that it was actually known as Alice in Wonderland Syndrome.

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  1. Date: 12/23/2012 12:24:00 PM
    I like the rhythm! Can feel the chaos. Good work

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 11:24:00 AM
    A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Rj. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/17/2012 4:03:00 PM
    Oh! you really got reading over, nice piece hope reading more of your work.

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 8:06:00 AM
    very interesting... I suppose the novelty of it was the magnet that held me till the end. It had a mesmerizing effect. I'm glad you posted this... Welcome to the forum....Jake