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In Wonderland

Tick Tock Reachin' for the Clock Hip Hop My mind don't stop Hand Fan Coming to a stand Neat Feat Wont get from my seat Strong Long My body's so wrong Teenie Tiny He looks almighty Loud Proud Voices in the clouds Room Boom To big to assume Space Race I'm not in this place Head Bed Full of lead Stars Mars Sitting in the sidecar Grow Woe Eyes a no show Grip Grin Hands so thin Fine Line Sanity's not mine Girth Mirth Coming back to earth Hulky Hazy I must be going crazy This a poem I wrote sometime ago about the strange things that would sometimes happen to my senses of time and size. It is only recently that I found out that it was actually known as Alice in Wonderland Syndrome.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/18/2016 10:14:00 AM
RJ, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. Luv **SKAT**
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Date: 12/23/2012 12:24:00 PM
I like the rhythm! Can feel the chaos. Good work
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Date: 12/19/2012 11:24:00 AM
A belated but very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Rj. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2012 8:06:00 AM
very interesting... I suppose the novelty of it was the magnet that held me till the end. It had a mesmerizing effect. I'm glad you posted this... Welcome to the forum....Jake
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