In the Woods

From the concrete jungle I make my escape
Just trying to get away from the rat race
And find  a peaceful place
Where I can gather my thoughts
And commune with nature as I aught


After a while I see the outline of trees
And then I feel A touch of breeze
Its gentle caress feels so good
I feel peaceful as I walk into the woods

I hear birds chirping overhead
And I see butterflies floating with wings spread
Insects going to and fro
As through the trees the sunlight glows

I close my eyes and let the sounds
soak into my being, I have found
the peace I seek amid these trees
Silently I walk, my thoughts at ease
Feeling like a butterfly floating on the breeze
My heart flutters and my soul is pleased

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/1/2013 8:48:00 PM
nice winning poem............. LUV.............. SKAT
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Date: 10/1/2013 7:52:00 PM
It is the best place to escape!!! Thankfully all I have to do is step out my door.....:-) congratulations Joseph....
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Date: 10/1/2013 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations for your win, Joseph. A job nicely done.
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:11:00 PM
Contest Winners: In the Woods. Sponsored by: Caleb Smith. - Congratulations on your wonderful poem in this contest, Joseph. - Pleased to read your poem, well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 12:10:00 PM
nice win Joseph, always~ Linda
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Date: 9/9/2013 2:37:00 PM
Beautiful images and write Joseph. Hugs
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Date: 9/6/2013 11:20:00 PM
a beautiful and peaceful little poem, my friend.
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Date: 9/5/2013 6:25:00 PM
Great writing, Joseph. I enjoyed the walk in the woods... I have a feeling that you will like "Trees" found in my portfolio... Jake
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Date: 9/5/2013 8:57:00 AM
Tranquility eloquently penned. Really enjoyed the sense of peace I got reading this xx
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Date: 9/5/2013 2:22:00 AM
- ... "A peaceful place" .... beautiful thoughts, Joseph. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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