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In the Twilight

In the twilight As the night falls our sight hindered Yet our love stays As moon rays spread nerve frays with night Fresh sea breeze blows As wave slows down ~heart flows with joy. Olusegun Arowolo CONTEST:'Than Bauk A Twilight' sponsored by Nette Onclaud

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Date: 4/19/2012 4:26:00 PM
Great work..Congrats...Sara
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Date: 4/19/2012 3:51:00 PM
Very good & dreamy too! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:05:00 AM
Congrats on placing number one! Enjoyed:)
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Date: 4/18/2012 10:57:00 AM
Well done. Congratulations on your no. 1. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 9:45:00 AM
congrats on your win
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Date: 4/18/2012 5:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win xx
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:37:00 PM
You did very nicely with this type of form. Hope you score well in the contest.
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Date: 4/12/2012 8:24:00 PM
Very nice Pal!!! nothing like the moon by the sea at twilight for love... ;) good luck in the contest...big huggsss,love deb
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Date: 4/12/2012 4:53:00 PM
this is a very nice Than-Bauk ...well done...regards...Joseph
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