In the Mornin'

In The Mornin'

(Chorus)
I will see you in the mornin'
When this long night has flown away

There was a time when I was young
When life had only just begun
And lookin' back I'm glad that I was born then.

A simple time and slower pace
Until the day I saw her face
Then everything was changed without a warnin'.
(Chorus)
I will see you in the mornin'
When this long night has flown away

She took me captive from the start
But swore she'd never break my heart
And magic wove a web of love and more then.

She made me laugh. She made me cry
But always was my alibi 
Through thick and thin regardless of the stormin'...
(Repeat Chorus)

Then late one night these fourty years
Went flashing in a flood of tears.
I held her close and heard her whisper "Yours", then.

She closed her eyes. I wiped the tears.
Then one last time to ease my fears
She whispered out these words in sweet adorin'...
(Chorus)
I will see you in the mornin'
When this long night has flown away
I will see you in the mornin'
As the dawn breaks another day...

(Chorus--repeat ad lib to end)

©deborah burch
1.31.2013


(To the tune of Hallelujah)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/12/2013 5:18:00 PM
Very impressive Deb. I could hear the music playing. . .Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/11/2013 10:00:00 AM
Good morning,Deborah.. Congrats!!! :-) on your winning poem. *Always~PD
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Date: 2/11/2013 9:14:00 AM
Wow !! Love this...I like where you went in your entry. Goosebumps here...love the chorus !! Congrats on your win !!
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Date: 2/7/2013 4:19:00 AM
So Daphne...when you become a famous songwriter are you going to forget about me?...I see a chart-topper here...also thanks for the hug you gave me in your last comment...Oooh, that was nice!...What kind of perfume is that? - Trevor
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Date: 2/6/2013 11:30:00 AM
Well done this a smasher Deborah luv xx
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Date: 2/4/2013 11:04:00 AM
So sweet and romantic ...... let us sing together Deborah! - Very nice poem! - Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2013 11:38:00 AM
Send me a CD, love to hear it! LOL Absolutely beautiful Deb... hugs, Jack
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Date: 2/1/2013 9:12:00 AM
a beautiful love story Deb....great write...hugs
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Date: 2/1/2013 4:10:00 AM
And Hallelujah to you Deborah, with this wonderful well thought out poem, so inspiring, can imagine this being performed...
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Date: 1/31/2013 9:49:00 PM
Deborah, a deep and heartfelt poem. good luck in the contest..pd
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