In the Land of the Midnight Sun

Long ago, in the fastness of the north
lived a people known as the Inuit.
They lived in perpetual darkness.
Although they had heard of light from Crow
they at first would not believe him.
They made him repeat this fairy tale 
many times, for it sparked imagination.
Imagine how long they could hunt.
Imagine seeing polar bear before he saw them.
They begged Crow to find and bring the light.
“But I am too old and daylight is far to the south”.
After much begging the old crow relented.
He flew through many dark miles of the north
and just as he was about to change his mind
he saw light - - - just a speck on the horizon.  

Suddenly light burst upon him as the daylight
world exploded around him in brilliance.
He had to stop and rest and comprehend
this wonder of wonders called light.
He noticed the blue sky, the blue stream
and the young girl walking back to a village.
She carried a pail of the blue water as she passed
beneath the tree in which he rested.
Turning into a small speck of dust, 
she did not notice Crow as he drifted into her parka.
As they neared the village, Crow saw a young boy
playing with a ball of daylight, bouncing on a string.
Crow flew from her coat, and grabbed the ball.
He flew into the endless blue sky,
the ball of daylight trailing along behind him.

Waiting impatiently, the Inuit saw a tiny speck of light
moving towards them in the darkness.
Soon it grew brighter and brighter 
and Crow dropped it in the center of their village.
It exploded into a burst of light, revealing everything.
It illuminated every dark corner and chased away shadow.  
But as the Inuit danced and celebrated 
Crow told them the light would not last forever.
The ball of light would have to rest for six months
each year in order to gain its strength back.
“Half a year of daylight is enough” the Inuit said
and to this day they build their lives around 
six months of day and six months of night.  


An Inuit myth retold by S.E. Schlosser,
made into this poem July 15 2012 
By: Charles Henderson ©

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 8/10/2012 12:22:00 PM
A facinating and wonderful tale! Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Dungeon"contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:06:00 AM
Charles congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/22/2012 3:36:00 PM
Sometime..I may get to Alaska BUT hey there are no monuments of man there [fret] maybe see the last iceburg? Congrad's on your fine verse winning big! Light & Love
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Date: 7/22/2012 10:05:00 AM
wow, way to retell a story, Charles. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/22/2012 7:39:00 AM
congrats Charles on a thrilling write and win for this challenging contest by Debbie luv..
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Date: 7/20/2012 1:57:00 PM
Lovely story/poem about Midnight Sun Charles - in north of Norway they have midnight sun and it is beautiful.....colorful explosion! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/16/2012 11:31:00 AM
Love this story poem. A great myth reworked.
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Date: 7/15/2012 10:50:00 PM
Love the story! Made me smile.~Tammy~
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Date: 7/15/2012 6:08:00 PM
Great story retold..That would be a stressful life..It would be terrible for people who have SAD...If for a contest, reads like a winner.Sara
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Date: 7/15/2012 3:16:00 PM
Lovely Chas perfect choice! Light & Love
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