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In The Dark

Walking alone in the dark
All is silent
Until theres a snap of a twig
Hands come from behind
Holding my neck
I try to scream
Noone Hears
The hands grow tighter
I give up fighting
I take a final breath
He lays me in the bushes
My body cold and still
Noone knows who did it
They probly never will

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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:50:00 PM
    Cara, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda

  1. Date: 5/12/2013 3:39:00 AM
    Congrats on your win. Rick

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 10:31:00 PM
    CONGRATULATIONS CARA, thanks for the nice and lovely poem you entered in my "Heaven Sent / Grace" contest. Take care of yourself and enjoy the blessings of today and tomorrow. LUV*LINDA

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 9:42:00 PM
    Cara, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

  1. Date: 5/9/2013 11:24:00 AM
    Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 7:15:00 AM
    Scary Cara, congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 6:30:00 AM
    Congrats on your creepy good one. BG

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 1:40:00 AM
    Caravan, congrats on your win. Rick

    Zablocki Avatar Rick Zablocki
    Date: 5/8/2013 1:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry I meant Cara.
  1. Date: 5/7/2013 9:26:00 PM
    Hi Cara, I'm back...LOL ~Congratulations :-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 9:35:00 PM
    Hi Cara, I will be back tomorrow to read your poetry... Goodnight... :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 6:19:00 PM
    Cara, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; If you like, please consider checking out my newest contest for fun : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems as of now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on certain poems, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA"