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In That Clasp of Silence

I slither through the deep forest across a mystical scene collecting remains from last evening’s venture : a shiny ligure, china teapot, faded locket, and scraps of letters on a trail of past impressions. By now, periscope of dawn’s glitter enlarges its serene movements as light’s thick veil blinds my vision on a quadrivial of glossed field ,encircling my reality fragile and calm amidst balmy scent of air entering my veins in gradual awareness. In that clasp of silence purely unbelievable reservoir of breath refills tired bosoms; and the forest stands still in its auburn robe waiting for clouds to form pathways before the sun returns me back home. Any Subject Contest of Shadow Hamilton by nette onclaud 11 jul 2013

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Date: 7/27/2013 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Nette! Love, Annalise
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Date: 7/27/2013 1:23:00 PM
NETTE,.... Congratulations, in the any subject contest... have yourself a sweet day... LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2013 12:57:00 AM
Congrats Nette....Seren
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Date: 7/26/2013 6:45:00 PM
nette, Congratulations on your awesome win. love ~ SKAT~...
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Date: 7/26/2013 7:03:00 AM
Change periscope to pericope. The poem is more than beautiful, congratulations.
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Date: 7/26/2013 3:53:00 AM
Love it Nette Congrats on your win in my contest ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/14/2013 11:22:00 AM
Beautiful clasp of silence deeply penned from a visionary imagination. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/14/2013 9:13:00 AM
Yes,Breathless poetry!!!
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Date: 7/12/2013 6:57:00 AM
I too am breathless. Wonderful imagery.
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Date: 7/11/2013 5:41:00 PM
You always take my breath away! So beautiful is this!
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:51:00 PM
This is a wonderfully glorious write my friend! You have done excellently for the contest, what I feel to be a very challenging and difficult contest! I just loved the feel of this intriguing poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:42:00 PM
Nette, your poem is beautiful, so well written, sure to be a winner, constance
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Date: 7/11/2013 3:44:00 PM
Just beauteous! :o)
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Date: 7/11/2013 3:11:00 PM
Autumn's robe is a beautifully colored one..Enjoyed reading your creative work this afternoon..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 7/11/2013 3:07:00 PM
I got massive chills on this piece. Again, the power of silence can be on very significant power. I love what you did here.
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