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In style

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In style

Once there was a man called John bumble,
scheming to fire others pretty humble.
hype, his great addiction,
style, only his illusion.
bloody always fires for his own rumble!

written on 23-08-2013.
edited on 24-08-2013 after taking a suggestion from Poet.Andrea. 
"Simple" first line end changed to "bumble".

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  1. Date: 8/23/2013 8:25:00 PM
    It's good to see you making an effort with limerick., a difficult style for many people mostly because of the meter used. Your first end word simple does not quite rhyme with humble and rumble. Maybe you could call the man John bumble!! there are many good umble rhymes!! thanks for your kind comments today. Let me see one more of your poems.

    Date: 8/24/2013 2:33:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Andrea thanks for visiting here.Extremely happy that you are affectionate to correct me.The real fact is i have evolved to a greater degree after joining this community.I need some good mentoring to shape up further. I do really expect some good advices rather than praises from an established poet like you. Thank you Andrea.