In Need of the Pill of Life

The pill of life, so in need of it am I It can even be seen as an alibi All for the sake of the lost humanity In my being, so deep like a cavity! The pill of life, surely to mend my heart Broken, it is now in need of a fresh start A reason to love and laugh Instead of choking with a cough A red pill it must be, found in the Heavens Given to those who relish God so much that he glistens A pill given to those who deserve it And who need its power bit by bit! A pill to cure me of my sinful nature A pill surely to open up an eternal adventure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/27/2013 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
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Date: 2/26/2013 2:02:00 PM
A G, a clever pill, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA
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Date: 2/24/2013 10:16:00 AM
Many congratulations Anoucheka xx
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Date: 1/29/2013 10:20:00 AM
Beautiful writing dearest. I believe the red pill we all need and received was Christs blood spilled for us. It covers all our sinful natures if we ask.... blessings...
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 2/1/2013 7:52:00 AM
True :) Thks
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