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In My Perfect World

in my perfect world none would lack for food or clothes red, yellow black and white would all be equal a child would never have to fear a hand raised up for a touch would always be in given in love we’d share and share alike with all and peace on earth would reign once more

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Date: 7/6/2010 5:00:00 AM
This is a wonderful dream, Jerri, if only it could come true.. Love Constance
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Date: 7/5/2010 9:01:00 PM
Makes me think of Christmas Jerri and good will to men theme.. a nice entry for Carol's contest. good luck.. well written.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..AlohA...
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Date: 7/5/2010 7:47:00 PM
Very beautifully writ. Only if the world were that way we'd be living in paradise.
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Date: 7/5/2010 6:18:00 PM
that would be perfect to have that... lovely write...P.D.
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