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'in My Attic Room'

A little girl with long tangled hair Soft as a whisper, I touched his arm Would you like tea, Grandpa? In my attic room Two china cups properly filled Little hands held yours for you We dunked cookies, remember? In my attic room That day was special When Grandpa and me had tea I sure miss you Grandpa? In my attic room ______________________ November 28, 2012 Poetry/Verse/ 'In My Attic Room' Copyright Protected, ID 11-438-943-28 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France

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Date: 12/3/2012 1:08:00 PM
Dear Constance-Dear Heart, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit This is a Gem. A great Tribute by a Souper POETESS, I did not know YOU were back are YOU feeling ok? Did YOU have surgery? I have missed YOU LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 12/3/2012 8:41:00 AM
lovely emotion from u dear heart .. my Grandpa was a nice man who spoiled me as a child .. with cups of ice cream in his brimmed hat .. sweet words my friend from a sweet lady whom I miss very much luv ..
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:24:00 AM
lovely tribute, my friend. I hope you are having a good weekend x
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Date: 11/29/2012 5:09:00 PM
a magical little moment. I never had one of these with my own grandpas nor with my dad. Lovely one, Constance.
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Date: 11/29/2012 3:59:00 PM
Great image you have painted, I feel like I was sitting at a close distance and listening in.
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Date: 11/28/2012 12:14:00 PM
This is a powerful and intriguing write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this remarkable and outstanding poem this afternoon! What a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/28/2012 11:34:00 AM
A beautiful piece and memory Constance; really enjoyed this gem of yours. Love Wilma
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Date: 11/28/2012 8:08:00 AM
Constance a lovely dedication, it reads well...David
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Date: 11/28/2012 8:01:00 AM
Oh gosh I still miss my grandparents. this is sweet xx
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