In Memories of You

I gave my heart,
I gave my soul
oh valley green and true
doin’ the best I can,
but it seemed
not good enough for you.
I tried so hard,
so hard to please
the decision to leave
the outlook was bleak,
in dire straits
another life to seek.
I slipped away,
degrees in passing
on that epic journey
glanced at foreign lands,
to the end of the earth
paradise and golden sands.
Many years have passed by
it was the ultimate conclusion.
Yet!  Am I still a dreamer
maybe still a fool?
When my mind is heavy
in memories of you.

 © Harry J Horsman  2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/16/2013 9:04:00 PM
Dear Harry, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Great Rememberance POEM. Soup Mail Call. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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Date: 10/16/2013 8:46:00 PM
Oh my, beautiful and heartbreaking words, Harry! It's so sad when love is left behind and only memories are reality. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/16/2013 6:41:00 PM
wow, harry, one of your best. When you write from the heart. WOW. I see you posted five new ones in one day. I will save the other two for later since always I am running out of your poems to visit. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/16/2013 12:51:00 PM
Nice loyal immigrant's remembrance beautifully pictured. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:23:00 AM
I agree with Charmaine says, dreamers are not always fools, harry
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Date: 10/16/2013 9:15:00 AM
This poem gave me goosebumps Harry..They say love is for fools but I do not see a fool..I see a man with the capability to love.Memories can be heavy when distance seperates dreams .An outstanding beauty you ve penned.Im the one gob smacked nw : ).Tnks for your visit to my humble verse.
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