In Love With a Gangster 2

Thousand pieces of my broken heart

writhe and sings the tale of bedevilment[ torture]

love kills when faith turns delusive.

Innocense is masscred

promises are shattered

I have lived with the darkest truth,

a killer behind the beautiful face,

his ugliest secrets.

A gangster  only knows  his gun

traitorous to even his own  mother and son

I am one of those fallen angels,

 a blood splattered mistress,

under his satanic grip.

my beautiful body now bruished

damages are irrepairable..

Graveyard will surely smell this monster

My life ends in love with this gangster…

To be continues….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/5/2012 5:24:00 PM
Wow, love it.
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Date: 12/17/2011 3:59:00 PM
WOW,,,my old friend,,,this is a deep write,,,and stays true to your style,,,it is a wild story,,,,filled with emotional,,,secrets,,,just wonderful....
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:16:00 PM
Red, riviting, the smell of death it is so near, when life itself we have to fear, thank you for your kind words..David
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Date: 12/4/2011 3:15:00 PM
Red, riviting, the smell of it is so near, when life itself we have to fear, thank you for your kind words..David
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Date: 12/3/2011 9:03:00 AM
wow! what a story... don't think i've ever been in love with a gangster... can't wait to read the way it ends up..always..p.d.96dr
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Date: 11/16/2011 6:05:00 PM
Where is the 3rd one?
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Date: 11/16/2011 10:48:00 AM
An interesting poem Smriti, quite a lot in this write..!
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Date: 11/2/2011 5:17:00 AM
"love kills when faith turns delusive.". this line shows my condition presently,lovely written Smriti ji, Amit
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:00:00 PM
I am looking much more forward to lets make love 7 then to In Love with a Gangster 3...... but anthing you put to the screen is a pleasure. check out my latest poem (it could be about you)
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Date: 10/8/2011 6:26:00 PM
yeah, agreein' with prince... edja the seater here, write on, please and thanks ~N
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Date: 10/8/2011 3:47:00 PM
i can't wait for the remaining part of this story/poem....nice piece my dear
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