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In His Bed Part 2


In his bed she hears him approach with long strides.
The covers are over her head as she pretends to hide.
With one swift yank she is left naked and bare.
Meeting his eyes in a longing appreciative stare.
In his bed he falls swiftly into her welcoming arms.
With a fiery passionate kiss he surrenders to her womanly charms.
She hungers for him like she has for no other. 
Just being with him sends her into a delicious shudder.

In his bed she helps him out of his clothes as quickly as she can. 
Wanting to feel his skin touching hers yet once again.
She marvels at his physique, he is a feast for her eyes.
She can never get enough of him no matter how much she tries.
In his bed she gives his nipple a lick, then a gentle bite.
Her hand grasps his hardness, they both are filled with delight.
She lowers herself and teases him deliberately with her tongue.
The music that they make together has only just wondrously begun.
In his bed he pulls her gently away, for he is on the verge.
He does not want any waiting time before they finally merge.
His eyes light up as they take in each and every curve.
A giggle escapes her lips as she sweetly whispers....."self serve!"
In his bed he is overcome with hunger, his eyes fill with lust.
His lips trail kisses down her arms before they settle on her bust.
Up and down each leg, not a spot he wants to miss.
He feels her body twitch and tremble from each perfectly placed kiss.
In his bed she feels his tongue lascivious lick her inner thigh.
She marvels at his patience, he is unlike any other guy.
She lets out a gasp as he zooms in on the right spot.
He deftly uses his tongue and lips, shy he is not.
In his bed he hears her breath quicken and feels her body shake.
If this is a dream, then he hopes he'll never wake.
He covers her body with his and miraculously they become one.
The pleasure so immense and they only just begun.

Copyright © Cecilia Macfarlane

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  1. Date: 4/14/2015 2:35:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:51:00 PM
    I swear I have seen ALL your poems, this one too!! About exotic marigold hotel. Yes, it is so great. /have you seen the movies from India? With the dancing and singing. I went to one in Salt Lake today but I didn't like its tragic ending.

  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:32:00 AM
    "GULP!" Well, Cecile, I was thinking after Part-1 it couldn't get much better, but how very wrong i was. This literally sizzles and near melted me into my socks, my mouse skittering across the desk with its tail smoking, my screen steaming-over from the heat. Talk about well rendered tender, arousing, erotic pleasure, this is about as good as it gets, believe me. I really love it … oh-MY! More-more-more!My warmest hug of genuine thanks, Cecile ~ Richard

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 10:18:00 AM
    OH YES! :-)

  1. Date: 6/8/2012 9:57:00 PM
    I see you got a lot of male followers on this one. (along with Lizzy as well). Just hope the Soup snoop patrol does not find it. Now, missy, such erotica like this is not permitted at poetrysoup.hahaha (but I will never tell) Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:40:00 AM
    Absolutely astounding! Bravo. What passion; What bravado; My heart is pounding and my blood pressure is boiling. Thank you for having the courage to go where few women go with their poetry. And so well done on so many levels. I will use this as an instruction manual - ;-)

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 11:36:00 AM
    sensual and vibratingly erotic...David

  1. Date: 11/17/2011 4:21:00 PM
    Erotica at its finest. I read both and they steam!

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 8:59:00 AM
    Excellent piece Cecilia, its warmed this Scotsman up no end. Thank you for sharing. I like to write passionate poems also. If you get a spare moment, you can view them at if you wish you can leave a comment >> James

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 11:17:00 PM
    Cecilia, more explicit erotic perfection. I'm saving this one until I get out of this damned hospital. They have too many rules here although the night nurse flirts and giggled nicely when she read part 1 and this steamy followup. Thanks so much. We love this. Love, Will and Marsha

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 7:35:00 AM
    Great erotic piece, Cecilia! Excellent! Very well written. Your talent shines with those amazing images. It's goes to my favs. Good job. Ruben.