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In Good Conscience

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In Good Conscience

Heavily tread, are those small fractious steps On the stairs to my own peace of mind The sound of transgressions that I'd rather forget is the pounding of a most clamorous kind The dialogue I'm having, within my own self drums on the door of the closed minded truth I try to rewrite scripts, shoving back on the shelf But the turbulence shakes them loose No matter, how buried, how deep I will hide them My conscience can shovel them out That child inside me, denies what was done then But can't deafen the voices that shout I profess to regret many sins I've committed The most difficult task is one of admitting
__________________________________ Revised 4/6/13__ __________________________________ (Original Poem....Diminished Hexaverse) MY CONSCIENCE heavy on the stairs the sound of my thoughts- my own voice resounds and pounds on my door of solitary the dialogue within myself never perjured is translucent I profess to launder past regrets if stains can be cleansed _____________ 2/14/11 ___________________________________________________________ Both poems submitted for Roy Jerden's Contest: "Makeover"

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  1. Date: 5/1/2013 5:58:00 PM
    Carrie, i like your winning poem in Debbie's contest... take care..PD

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:35:00 AM
    Great winning work..It always amazes me that God has already forgiven us but we can't forgive ourself of transgressions..Great work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/27/2013 5:23:00 AM
    Wow, my dearest Carrie, the second one give me chills, I believe you ate your poetry in this one love, take care and congrats, always in my thoughts and heart xxx

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 12:03:00 AM
    Big Congrats on your win Carrie~A.O

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Well done, congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 3:35:00 PM
    Aren't we all different [I hate brevity LOL hugs to Kathy] and I have to tell you that second one is killer good.And you too know Deb likes her sonnets! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Congratulations Carrie Each poem clarifies the other. SuZ

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 12:29:00 PM
    Love both Carrie, a perfect transition of thoughts and form!

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 10:08:00 AM
    Many congratulations Carrie luv , well done

  1. Date: 4/25/2013 8:54:00 AM
    Wow! FAVing it. Congrats on your win, Carrie. Love, Su

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 8:22:00 AM
    Carrie - How fortunate for me I read these wonderful works which mirror me in all ways. Your style of expressing these thoughts in such beauty is superb. I think I'm partial to the first one because I am a great fan of brevity. One stands alone without the other is a glories message. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 6:29:00 PM
    yep, this is an excellent example of a metamorph that got even better!!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 11:11:00 AM
    an excellent metamorph...aren't these contests addictive?

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:35:00 AM
    spoilt for choice love both of these Carrie,, but i also love sonnets and wow this is good...

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 8:12:00 PM
    Very awesome Carrie....admitting you are human requires no regrets though...hope you are not being hard on are sweet.....Donna

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:27:00 PM
    I don't think you could have done this more perfectly, my lady! I like the second version more, but both poems are absolutely amazing. Well done, Carrie! Have a splendid rest of the day. Hugs! :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 9:49:00 AM
    Carrie dear I DO like the sonnet better, how about you? which do you like better? PS ;) Thanks so much for stopping by my verses. Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:44:00 AM
    carrie love both of these,one of the best I have read for the contest, good luck...David

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 8:39:00 PM
    Carrie, i love the way you beautifully transformed the poem. But, somehow I love the first one you wrote. a good conscience should always stay clean... always~ Linda