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in a mind life goes on

you died long ago;
 yet i still feel your breath
brush against me
like pen on paper
searching a mind
for answers

i try to stay 
inside the lines
they are everywhere
i turn 
and I turn
wrist upward
and feel you
like a knife
against flesh
full force

it drains me
and i die
within each poem

and yet
you live

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  1. Date: 9/3/2013 10:47:00 AM
    i think this person lives on through your insperation to write great poetry xxx davidscott

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:24:00 PM
    Writing is certainly very draining... I felt that wisp of a knife in some of my writing... You have expressed that feeling very well.. :)

  1. Date: 8/29/2013 8:47:00 AM
    So true Sandra, you shared your deepest emotion and passion somehow on this poem... Sorry to hear sometimes our muses brings the sorrow out of our writes... but, I look towards the greater side of ones pens... love love..Linda

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 8/29/2013 8:54:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Linda...I just told a co-worker today, when she said her son writes poetry that is often dark and said, I told her, it's a good therapy, sometimes releases those emotions helps bring on a smile...I said it doesn't mean he is depressed...she said now I get it... have a great day! Hugs
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Brilliant Sandra...One of the most origional and unique descriptions of what writing is all about that I have seen... And PLEASE don't stay inside those lines! - Tim

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 8/27/2013 7:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Tim....sometimes I try and make my muse write pretty but she goes in her own direction and this kind of stuff spills out...I don't think I could stay inside the lines if I wanted too....hugs :)
  1. Date: 8/27/2013 2:22:00 PM
    Wow!!!!!!!! I felt every bit of this poem. Man this is very nicely written beautiful poem poet

    Adams Avatar Sandra Adams
    Date: 8/27/2013 7:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much Sean....hugs :)