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In a Hurry

I'm in a hurry I cannot stay, it seems the time just slips away. I try so hard to get things done, no time to do it all under the sun. Deadlines here and deadlines there, so many deadlines everywhere! I have to work, no time to play, just to get things done today!

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Daver Austin

Date: 1/19/2010 11:34:00 AM

Frustrating aint it. Try a good old shot of Jack Daniels with a beer chaser. Seriously, I like your write. Love, daver

Elaine George

Date: 1/13/2010 2:33:00 AM

Yes! There should be more hours in the day, but I suppose then there would be more things to do and we would be in the same boat again. Geat writing Sena. Love, Lainie

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 1/12/2010 7:12:00 PM

Great write! Sena! Indeed, it is very true. I hope you get time to relax a bit and be with family and/or friends. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poetry and for taking the time to read them. Much appreciated. You have soup mail. Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 1/12/2010 6:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading...but you know the old saying.."all work and no play"....lol Marty

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2010 2:29:00 PM

Love this poem, Sena. As a former reporter, I can really relate to the stress of deadlines. Today it seems everyone is under the gun to do everything as fast as possible. Great write! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/12/2010 11:17:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Sena. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol