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In a Hotel Room

I sit on the edge of the bed thinking Wishing you were here or that I was there These work related trips keeps me hurting But then my heart, I come to you and share I sit in the middle of a moon beam That comes into the room’s hotel window A lonely bit of light, lonely it seems Opens the room to its cool silver glow I pout as I lay onto the hard bed Seemingly to sure keep me up all night I texted her with my whole soul, I sure pled Hoping she’s up and will respond tonight It’s hard to be away from by loved one But soon I'll be home, my love will be shown
Entrant into Black Eyed Susan's "In a Hotel Room..." contest 2/7/2013

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 8:57:00 AM
    again, congrats on your win Russel, your poems are gem to be read :) - hug, yanny

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 3:33:00 AM
    Nice poem heard a lot about it ..a moment of meditation and loneliness..Russell am new on soup plz view and comment on my poems ..thnks

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 2:00:00 AM
    Many Congratulations on your win Russell, sorry i am a bit late xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:36:00 AM
    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:41:00 PM
    Congratulations, Russell. It's great to finally see this one of yours. GREAT job.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:15:00 PM
    A great poem, full of longing. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:17:00 PM
    Hello Russell, , CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 7:44:00 AM
    Russell I enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Reads like a winner to me..I hope that this isn't true but just from knowing this is how some people live..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 11:08:00 AM
    I do feel sorry for those that work from home, you have done this well xx

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 9:47:00 AM
    Ahhhh so sweet... lovely one Russell

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:39:00 PM
    Nice write to the one you love my friend. Hurry on home to her, remember to take a cupfull of the moon rays. One love. Joy Wells

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:20:00 PM
    Love this one !! I've spent many a night away from home alone in a hotel room. It was my job that took me away from home from Mon to Friday for years. I remember those nights of missing loved ones. You've captured it well within your words. Excellent writing skills my friend !! Thanks for faithfully reading and commenting on my words. This is a winner to me !!