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Imprisoned - Jun-jun Villanueva

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Imprisoned - Jun-jun Villanueva

IMPRISONED     (collaboration)


by~  Jun-jun Villanueva

Urbane cavalcade - flaunt in gaiety
Warbling hymns in ego - cyclicity
Jigging gracile moves in vivacity
Relishing in zest in this gravity
Kinsfolk in flamboyant fete - oh its fate?
Smiles, elation in face delineate
Like nothing's wrong makes me exasperate
No one cares? No one adores? it's too late
Recurrent nightmares peeve me in sublime
Making incubuses remorse in rhyme
Bequeathing qualm, fright and fear - death like crime
Kith and kin in laughs while I'm in grave time...


by~ Poet Destroyer

Twittering chime parade of glee
Unspectacular weed flowing trough me.
Boxed in a box like a tick or flea.
No one understands- what they can't see!
Outside myself holding my breath-
Or should I say what is left?
Trapping torment with false courtesy.
Preexisted past, without certainty.
Locked in a sanctuary grave of ivory ribs,
My life in a vault- trashed crib.
Feet lashing against my skin.
Twirling the rootless valves of sin.
No one cares! No one adores!
My prison trash coffin brought ashore.


A collaboration with * Jun-jun Villanueva

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 5:57:00 PM
    Just dropping by to ask how you are. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 10/27/2011 10:09:00 AM
    you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2011 8:04:00 PM
    " SOUP MAIL " my friend~~~~another collaboration is coming in our way....LOL~~~smile for a new day~~~*-*junjun

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 10:53:00 PM
    These collaborations are so interesting, a meeting of minds to tell a story. Loved it as it is well done.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:42:00 AM
    A very fun read, LInda. Some of the lines I loved were " trashed crib" and "feet lashing against my skin". You are the wizard of collaboration poems!!

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 9:50:00 PM
    You tell a sad tale with this one. Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 8/22/2011 3:03:00 PM
    Enjoyed this dual piece of poetry today. Just want to say that cabbage rolls is a staple in the midst of this province. It is a great veg food and one I think you would enjoy. You can make it rice and onion or you can use bacon or ground beef so it can be made several ways. We do not use meat in ours and bake it by adding a can of tomato soup. Yummy. love phyl

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 8:42:00 PM
    i cared . i adored. but no one answered my text. did they!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 6:24:00 PM
    oh another goodie which I already read on jun-jun's work.. good luck PD and jun-jun ... we are in Florida on vacation now for two weeks till after Labor Day .. with three little grand babies..so cute..so fun.. Ron is so tired..haha..luv it... glad my Living Liquid gave u a super contest idea..as I am hanging up my contest spurs for now my BFF... your BFF needs a break luv.. but not from friendship forever.

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 12:00:00 AM
    I can just see, the two of you poets, on a stage, hammering this one out ! I gotta go see the write before this, so I'll save my heys and yaaas !, james

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 11:52:00 PM
    u guys worked very well together. this flowed so well. Is 3 a crowd? Lol jk

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 10:41:00 PM
    a great piece of work, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on drive in theature memories.

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 2:55:00 PM
    I admire this idea, I was invited to do but my mind couldn't grasp the idea. The two of you flow so well.

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 7:42:00 AM
    Interesting one..So many fine works in this group..Soup mail..Sara

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 4:48:00 AM
    no escape for me ...uncertainty, watch out for the vault trashed crib, rootless panting raging sin, not within:) entertaining words are here, johnsons been n drank his beer...

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 2:05:00 AM
    great collabotation!!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 12:51:00 AM
    wow! he posted this already... xool.... And thank you Linda, have fun on your forever honeymoon.... p.d.

  1. Date: 8/19/2011 12:47:00 AM
    oh yes this one is fantastico PD my BFF and I read it on jun-jun's list of poetry.. excellent combo ..good luck in the contest.. your BFF in the middle of packing trying to sleep and comment..oh..