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Immerse Yourself

The local health club has a sign Encouraging recruits: “Immerse yourself” and what it means Is exercise pursuits. The concept is a clever one – The words sound so enticing. You delve into a hobby And immersion is the icing. But working out is not, for some, The means for self-improving; And other ways exist to get one’s Motivation moving. For me, the message that the gym Is trying to disperse Is one I’ll tweak a bit ‘cause I’ll Immerse myself in verse! Ilene Bauer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/7/2012 7:18:00 PM
Think about composing verses while peddling on the exercise bikes. I see people doing all other kinds of activities while they peddle.
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Date: 10/4/2012 4:28:00 PM
And I'll immerse myself in reading them. You wrap up the endings so well. Love em'.
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