I'M Walking Away

My Eyes
Seem Cold
You Hurt
Them So
My Hand
You Shook
My First
You Took
My Heart
Discarded
You Vowed
Then Parted
My Soul
Does Hurt
You Smirk
Then Curse 
My Stand
You Shook
My Grasp
You Felt
On Tight
I Held
You Pulled
I Fought
My Neck 
You Caught
My Cross
Did Fall
Within That 
Moment 
   I
Dropped 
The 
Ball
   My Eyes
See Clear
For Pity
You Can't
Put In Them
I'll Shed No
Tears For
Pain I've 
Carried 
Within Them
For There's
Been
Too Much 
Hurt, For
Me To Stay
And My Only
Choice Is
  To 
Walk
Away
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/19/2009 11:01:00 PM
I left you some soup mail...Raul
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:58:00 AM
aww some people just dont know how to cherish others, you deserve so much better, thanks for your kind comments on my poem paradise, God bless from diane
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Date: 4/3/2009 11:13:00 PM
I know the feeling...you love someone but they give you so much pain that you have to walk away...Good write Tyesha
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Date: 4/2/2009 2:26:00 PM
hi there thank u so much for your lovely comment that is a beautiful poem you have written GBU John
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Date: 4/2/2009 9:51:00 AM
Hearts do mend and your strength grows, as in life the lessons learned help to define who we are. You are very special and will find a love worthy of your goodness! Thank you for commenting on my featured poem also! Truely, ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/1/2009 8:33:00 PM
Tyesha - Sometimes its hard to know what to say because words just seem so futile - You are a very wonderful, compassionate and loving person and I have no doubt it is their loss and like Sharon said you will move on to better simply because thats what you deserve - happiness and love - Keep your head up high and never look back because you deserve so much more than all that hurt - Somebody is waiting to love you just as I love my wife - YF4L, in my prayers - God Bless you hon, MJ
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Date: 4/1/2009 12:58:00 PM
Life is a journey of learning, it's lessons difficult, but strength the final outcome. And that outcome will only lead you to new and better things. I feel all this in your wonderful write. Good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 4/1/2009 10:40:00 AM
You have a wonderful writing style, Tyesha. Great message here, and I love the creative rhyme scheme. Excellent!
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Date: 4/1/2009 2:28:00 AM
This poem holds such heartache and pain but the strength to walk away and start anew is never cheap. Great powerful writing.
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Date: 4/1/2009 2:04:00 AM
.... And new love, "Gods Chosen," will be handed to "You From Above!!!"~"Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day Dear Tyesha!!!:):)...."Wonderful Write!!!:):)
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Date: 4/1/2009 2:01:00 AM
Smile~"Beautifully Powerful & Well Written & Expressed Write Tyesha!!!:):)~Although I am sorry for any suffering of heart that "Your Preciousness" shall ever have to endure!? For through Your writings and love filled comments etc. I have sincerely come to admire "You" as a "Beautiful & Dear Lady~With A Heart & Soul of Gold!!!":):) And although the pain of love lost may linger? Before You know it, it shall pass!....cont....
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