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I'M Walking Away

My Eyes Seem Cold You Hurt Them So My Hand You Shook My First You Took My Heart Discarded You Vowed Then Parted My Soul Does Hurt You Smirk Then Curse My Stand You Shook My Grasp You Felt On Tight I Held You Pulled I Fought My Neck You Caught My Cross Did Fall Within That Moment I Dropped The Ball My Eyes See Clear For Pity You Can't Put In Them I'll Shed No Tears For Pain I've Carried Within Them For There's Been Too Much Hurt, For Me To Stay And My Only Choice Is To Walk Away

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Raul Moreno

Date: 5/19/2009 11:01:00 PM

I left you some soup mail...Raul

Diane Christian

Date: 4/7/2009 1:58:00 AM

aww some people just dont know how to cherish others, you deserve so much better, thanks for your kind comments on my poem paradise, God bless from diane

Belinda Parish

Date: 4/3/2009 11:13:00 PM

I know the feeling...you love someone but they give you so much pain that you have to walk away...Good write Tyesha

John Robert Bones

Date: 4/2/2009 2:26:00 PM

hi there thank u so much for your lovely comment that is a beautiful poem you have written GBU John

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/2/2009 9:51:00 AM

Hearts do mend and your strength grows, as in life the lessons learned help to define who we are. You are very special and will find a love worthy of your goodness! Thank you for commenting on my featured poem also! Truely, ~Trudy~

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/1/2009 8:33:00 PM

Tyesha - Sometimes its hard to know what to say because words just seem so futile - You are a very wonderful, compassionate and loving person and I have no doubt it is their loss and like Sharon said you will move on to better simply because thats what you deserve - happiness and love - Keep your head up high and never look back because you deserve so much more than all that hurt - Somebody is waiting to love you just as I love my wife - YF4L, in my prayers - God Bless you hon, MJ

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/1/2009 12:58:00 PM

Life is a journey of learning, it's lessons difficult, but strength the final outcome. And that outcome will only lead you to new and better things. I feel all this in your wonderful write. Good luck. Love, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2009 10:40:00 AM

You have a wonderful writing style, Tyesha. Great message here, and I love the creative rhyme scheme. Excellent!

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/1/2009 2:28:00 AM

This poem holds such heartache and pain but the strength to walk away and start anew is never cheap. Great powerful writing.

John Rhinem

Date: 4/1/2009 2:04:00 AM

.... And new love, "Gods Chosen," will be handed to "You From Above!!!"~"Love & Warmth Always To 'You & Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~Have A Very Blessed & Beautiful Day Dear Tyesha!!!:):)...."Wonderful Write!!!:):)

John Rhinem

Date: 4/1/2009 2:01:00 AM

Smile~"Beautifully Powerful & Well Written & Expressed Write Tyesha!!!:):)~Although I am sorry for any suffering of heart that "Your Preciousness" shall ever have to endure!? For through Your writings and love filled comments etc. I have sincerely come to admire "You" as a "Beautiful & Dear Lady~With A Heart & Soul of Gold!!!":):) And although the pain of love lost may linger? Before You know it, it shall pass!....cont....