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I'M Tired

I'm tired of all this mess. Even the woman I love I can't deal with the stress. And she's no angel from above! I'm tired of waiting for a letter and her poetry soup comment. I don't feel any better for her absence makes me vomit! I'm tired of the lack of affection. My sexuality must be too much. And our spiritual connection - well, we've just lost touch!!!

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Audrey Haick

Date: 4/9/2011 12:37:00 PM

You can't be tired of love, JAM. Whatever may have caused the rift between you two, perhaps can be fixed?? Be good to her and be patient, Papito. Love, Annalise

Louis Rams

Date: 4/8/2011 12:03:00 PM

your sexuality may be too much, or she's waiting for your gentle touch.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 8:19:00 AM

Nostalgiac and ingriguing tale of yearning of the love, Jimmy