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Im Sorry

I hope you remember all of the bad things you have done so far
I hope you still have the chance to fix them 
Im sorry it took me forever to write this letter to you
Ive been meaning to save you from what your about to become
For some reason i cant get a grip on it
I dont know what i want to say
I dont know how to help you
Im about to tell you about some of the things you are about to do
Right now your 16
Right now you are sitting on your bed listening to music
Reading a book on your favorite band
Smoking that cigarette
That will soon get you into all the other things that causes more problems for you
Try to avoid the guy you are about to let into your life
Remember that your not allowed to talk to strangers
Remember your mom told you that when you were 7
Its about time you listen to her
You will meet a girl
And you will end up hurting her
Dont take her to that club 
Where your band is about to play
Your not good at singing
And your bass playing still needs some work
Dont embarass yourself
It lowers your self esteem
And you will try to committ suicide
Multiple times
But dont worry 
It doesnt work
So stop trying to 
Kill yourself
Remember the night when you ran away
And went to go live with your aunt
Shes about to kick you out
Look under your bed
You will find 500 dollars
You put it there when you were young
You forgot 
Thats why im writing you
Remember it
Take it and use it wisely
Dont use it on the drugs 
Dont use it on the beer
Use it towards a better future
So then i dont have to write this letter again.


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  1. Date: 7/11/2015 8:33:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Orlin! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 3:05:00 PM
    orlin, A lovely win, Love **SKAT**

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 2:12:00 PM
    :) Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 8:28:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading this one again. I hope you listened to yourself.

  1. Date: 7/7/2015 4:03:00 AM
    Lovely write Orlin! Congrats on ur win!

  1. Date: 1/8/2013 4:26:00 PM
    Kurt, your poem rocks...., Congratulations with your winning poem in David's awesome contest.. pd

  1. Date: 1/6/2013 5:40:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/5/2013 4:15:00 AM
    Congratulations on your grand win!! Good day! :)

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 2:56:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win! :)

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Congratulations! Wishing you a Happy New Year!

  1. Date: 1/1/2013 7:40:00 AM
    My hearty congratulations on your super win and great write my dear Kurt! Happy New Year, too! hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 5:36:00 PM
    Good one, well expressed, Congrats and Happy New Year!

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Kurt congrats on your win ,I loved this one, thanks for entering...David

  1. Date: 12/31/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Big congrats Kurt, and all the best for the new year xx