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I'M Looking

I'm Looking

I am looking for a love that will last and one
that knows how to love. I want one that will 
stay forever. I don't want one that will walk
away - when things start to get rough.

I want my love to tell me sweet nothings,
when we sit together and look at the stars.
I want my love to tell me - I love you, when I
have problems and doubts in my mind.

If I find that love - then I will be happy and I'll
do my best to make things work right and my
love will be forever, until death do us part.... 

07/10/2013
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

Note: I'm not really looking for 
for no one - it's just a poem.

Copyright © Lucilla Carrillo | Year Posted 2013

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Michael Ainsley Date: 9/8/2013 8:49:00 PM Love is a lot of work but I think you know that Lucilla. It is nice to think there are couples in this world that can exsept one anothers faults along with all the good that comes from knowing one another well. Thanks for your poem. Michael. Login to Reply

Richard D Seal Date: 7/18/2013 6:12:00 PM Lucy, this not just a poem, this is a beautiful poem, maybe not written for you, but certainly you have penned this for many others. Take care, Richard Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 7/14/2013 7:57:00 PM Words of the heart <3 here.... I'm glad your well again. Now we just need to cheer you up! :o) Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 AM A very good poem at that. It is often when we are not looking that love knocks on our door. Either way we can be happy and fullfilled. God knows exactly what we need. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2013 10:27:00 AM - Just want to say: - Have a beautiful weekend, my dear friend Lucilla! . - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Tacito Date: 7/12/2013 10:24:00 AM Simple, direct, gorgeous. The way a need for love should be declared. Excellent! Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 7/12/2013 8:03:00 AM Search for love is search for God every human being unknowingly does.Dont bother too much about ' until death do us part' and such things, Lucilla, Thnx for the visit!! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/11/2013 11:51:00 PM It's a sweet poem. But are you a single lady? Nothing wrong to be looking!! I forgot if you were married or not! Login to Reply

Manel Gunatillake Date: 7/11/2013 8:49:00 PM I believe it is a on going search my dear. I was searching through out my youth, finally I stopped the search. But there is true love who will be beside you whatever or whoever you are. that is a rare Gift of life. Well,You will be a lucky one too! Thanks for your encouraging comments on mine. Lot of love and hugs Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/11/2013 3:09:00 PM Glad that you told us..I don't want to think that you are alone in this world..Enjoyed reading your work..There once was a song "Look'n For Love In All The Wrong Places"..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara Login to Reply

Good Night Date: 7/10/2013 10:30:00 PM everyone wants that special person great poem Login to Reply

John Posey Date: 7/10/2013 7:33:00 PM Lucilla, If you had not put that footnote on your entry you would have had dozens camped on your doorstep. Great writing. I share your talent for writing about fantasy. Thanks for all your comments.... Hugs...Jake Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 7/10/2013 7:26:00 PM I believe I have achieved that goal of finding my love! And it is a blissful thing, a very awesome pleasure to have being with her! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a significant piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2013 12:14:00 PM - Such love is what we all want Lucilla, eternal and true love! - Grow old together and be in love .... beautifully! - Thank you for being my faithful friend! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply