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I'M Looking

I'm Looking I am looking for a love that will last and one that knows how to love. I want one that will stay forever. I don't want one that will walk away - when things start to get rough. I want my love to tell me sweet nothings, when we sit together and look at the stars. I want my love to tell me - I love you, when I have problems and doubts in my mind. If I find that love - then I will be happy and I'll do my best to make things work right and my love will be forever, until death do us part....
07/10/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo Note: I'm not really looking for for no one - it's just a poem.

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  1. Date: 9/8/2013 8:49:00 PM
    Love is a lot of work but I think you know that Lucilla. It is nice to think there are couples in this world that can exsept one anothers faults along with all the good that comes from knowing one another well. Thanks for your poem. Michael.

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 6:12:00 PM
    Lucy, this not just a poem, this is a beautiful poem, maybe not written for you, but certainly you have penned this for many others. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Words of the heart <3 here.... I'm glad your well again. Now we just need to cheer you up! :o)

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 11:12:00 AM
    A very good poem at that. It is often when we are not looking that love knocks on our door. Either way we can be happy and fullfilled. God knows exactly what we need.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:27:00 AM
    - Just want to say: - Have a beautiful weekend, my dear friend Lucilla! . - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Simple, direct, gorgeous. The way a need for love should be declared. Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 8:03:00 AM
    Search for love is search for God every human being unknowingly does.Dont bother too much about ' until death do us part' and such things, Lucilla, Thnx for the visit!!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:51:00 PM
    It's a sweet poem. But are you a single lady? Nothing wrong to be looking!! I forgot if you were married or not!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 8:49:00 PM
    I believe it is a on going search my dear. I was searching through out my youth, finally I stopped the search. But there is true love who will be beside you whatever or whoever you are. that is a rare Gift of life. Well,You will be a lucky one too! Thanks for your encouraging comments on mine. Lot of love and hugs

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Well in case you are, I'll say a prayer for you tonight, that cupid sharpens his bow and arrow, I hope you are feeling better, and it is so nice to read your poetry, big hugs, xxx

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Glad that you told us..I don't want to think that you are alone in this world..Enjoyed reading your work..There once was a song "Look'n For Love In All The Wrong Places"..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 10:30:00 PM
    everyone wants that special person great poem

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 7:33:00 PM
    Lucilla, If you had not put that footnote on your entry you would have had dozens camped on your doorstep. Great writing. I share your talent for writing about fantasy. Thanks for all your comments.... Hugs...Jake

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 7:26:00 PM
    I believe I have achieved that goal of finding my love! And it is a blissful thing, a very awesome pleasure to have being with her! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! What a significant piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 12:14:00 PM
    - Such love is what we all want Lucilla, eternal and true love! - Grow old together and be in love .... beautifully! - Thank you for being my faithful friend! - Oxox / / Anne-Lise :)