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Illuminated Path

Through the thicket lies A very long beaten path; Lit by midday sun

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Date: 6/28/2009 3:42:00 PM

Hello Adell, I am so sorry to hear about your medical situation. I am praying for your recovery. God bless always! Joseph

Date: 4/1/2009 9:14:00 AM

Hello Adell, few words with a huge wisdom to glean. Very interesting poem. Ernilando

Date: 4/1/2009 6:18:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku.. the sun leading the way..well done.

Date: 3/29/2009 6:08:00 PM

the sun so powerful and yet so useful, hi Adell, I hope that this will find you well, take care D-nyce

Date: 3/18/2009 5:04:00 AM

Lovely visual and so much more you can take from this. Excelllent. Love, Shar

Date: 3/17/2009 4:00:00 PM

Nice use of imagery. The title works well with the poem. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen