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If You Were

If you were a painting You would be a painting of the sky If you were a book You would be ``A Catcher in the Rye`` If you were a bird You would fly high, so high So please, don`t be shy Because your dreams will die So please, don`t deny That you can do anything If you just try

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/15/2014 7:22:00 AM
Just lovely and very encouraging.. Beautifully penned Vesna.
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Date: 9/26/2013 10:22:00 PM
Encouraging words here! Peacde & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/1/2013 8:11:00 AM
What an outstanding poem, full of sending messages in a very artistic way. Love Terry xoxo A Fave......and a 7 >>>>>
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Date: 4/28/2013 7:37:00 AM
What wonderful poetry this is Vesna, so positive, so inspiring...
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Date: 4/26/2013 8:45:00 PM
I love it all. A very sweet poem and thought. charming. ~SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:50:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:47:00 PM
how cool calling someone Catcher in the Rye!! that was so creative.
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Date: 4/22/2013 3:50:00 AM
really good and encouraging write, a very enjoyable read. great stuff, have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 4/22/2013 2:14:00 AM
Nice one, and I totally agree with your wonderful write xx
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Date: 4/21/2013 4:35:00 PM
You have talent and you show it...Now all who read your posts will know it... great job, my dear.. Jake
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:08:00 PM
I like the flow to this one..Great thoughts penned..It says that you think some very good thoughts about someone..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by..I'll tell Cindy that you like her..Sara
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